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Can someone check this paragraph for any errors? please?
Does my topic sentence describe the rest of the paragraph or does it go with the paragraph? Property managers or community association managers help companies or businesses to manage property more efficiently. They can manage apartment buildings, commercial buildings such as shopping malls or industrial properties like marketing. Community association managers manage property by leasing, renting and maintaining property such as land, buildings and equipment. They keep records and prepare financial reports of the property status such as rates, vacant apartment, growth and purchase. Property managers plan for maintenance repairs and alteration of the property. They interact with residents or clients to provide services. Property managers need to be capable to read and understand government’s codes, regulations, financial reports and to read credit reports. Have ability to maintain friendly, speak clearly and understand information and ideas. Have a working knowledge of real state, sales marketing, clerical, and administration and management principles. This field does not require a bachelor’s Business degree however is preferable by most companies.
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- Property managers or community association managers help companies or businesses support it to work more efficiently. They can manage apartment buildings and commercial buildings such as shopping malls or industrial properties like marketing. Community association managers manage property by leasing, renting, and maintaining property such as land, buildings, and equipment. They keep records and prepare financial reports of the property status of rates, vacant apartment, growth and purchase. Property managers plan for maintenance repairs and alteration of the property. They interact with residents or clients to provide services. Property managers need to be capable to read and understand government’s codes, regulations, financial reports and to read credit reports. they must also have the ability to maintain friendliness, speak clearly, and understand information and ideas. Plus knowledge of real estate, sales marketing, clerical, and administration and management principles. This field does not require a bachelor’s Business degree however is preferable by most companies.
- I think your topic sentence should kind of hint at least why your telling me this. Beause they are a good idea or a bad idea. Should I get one or stay away. Because most lay people that try to manage a property are under prepared. I don't take this for a paragraph designed to persuade but they should know what to get out of it. I see a lot of this and that -does- this and that. Also, the last sentence dose not fit the in the paragraph. One other thing I saw, --Community association managers manage property (redundant) Like saying Baseball players play baseball and sign autographs . . . There is a lot of "They(s) in the paragraph. Since there are two types of managers introduced in the topic sentence I thought this would be a compare and contrast paragraph. The reader can get lost as to which one They refers to. If they both refer to management agencies, maybe use that term in your TS. Some of your helpers are going to rewrite your paragraph for you. Hhhmmm, dubious help at best. Writing a good paragraph is a skill you will need in life unless you're a laborer or want to get paid by the hour all your life. Take some time to get good at it.
- Property and community association managers help companies or businesses support it to work more efficiently. They can manage apartment and commercial buildings such as: shopping malls or industrial properties like marketing. Community association managers manage property by leasing, renting, and maintaining property such as: land, buildings, and equipment. They keep records and prepare financial reports of the property status of rates, vacant apartment, growth and purchase. Property managers plan for maintenance repairs and alteration of the property. They interact with residents or clients to provide services. Property managers need to be capable to read and understand government’s codes, regulations, financial reports, and credit reports. They must also have the ability to be friendly, to speak clearly, and understand information and ideas. In addition, they must have knowledge of real estate, sales marketing, clerical, and administration and management principles. This field does not require a bachelor’s Business degree; however it is preferable by most companies. i edited it to my best
